ENC 1101 • Hоnоrlоck Finаl Exаm Kаne Confidential Essay Revision Final revision of your investigative feature Format Honorlock Final ExamRecorded video, audio, screen, and web activity Time Limit UntimedMust be completed once started Final Deadline Thursday, 7/3011:59 p.m. For this final exam, you will revise your Kane Confidential Investigative Feature. This is not a new essay on a new topic. Your job is to improve the draft you already submitted. Prepare before starting Honorlock. The exam is untimed, but it must be completed once started. Writing Prompt Revise your Kane Confidential Investigative Feature so that it gives a clear, evidence-based answer to this question: Did Charles Foster Kane’s newspapers serve the public interest, or did they manipulate public opinion in ways that threatened democratic society? Your revised feature should sound like an investigative article for educated public readers. It should not sound like a movie review, plot summary, or basic school essay. Basic Instructions Open your previously submitted Kane Confidential draft before starting Honorlock. Open your feedback, rubric comments, and previous Kane assignments before starting Honorlock. Use the Honorlock session to revise the draft, not to start over from scratch. Keep the same central topic: Kane, media power, public trust, journalism ethics, and democratic society. Revise for organization, evidence, source use, analysis, style, grammar, and citation support. Complete the Honorlock revision once you start it. Submit before Thursday, 7/30 at 11:59 p.m. Key Requirements Your revised feature should include or strengthen these parts: Feature Structure Headline Lede Nut graf Background or context Three clear findings Conclusion with public meaning Evidence and Sources Specific film evidence from Citizen Kane Research source evidence Law or policy source Clear source attribution Competing interpretation or complication Implications or recommendation Sources Consulted section A strong revision does not simply make the essay longer. It makes the investigation clearer, better organized, more specific, and easier for a public reader to follow. How to Use Your Revision Time The exam is untimed, so do not rush. Use your time in this order: Start with feedback. Identify the three biggest changes your draft needs. Fix the opening. Make sure the headline, lede, and nut graf identify the public issue. Organize the body. Build the draft around three findings, not plot summary. Strengthen evidence. Use specific film scenes and explain what each scene proves. Use sources clearly. Do not just name a source. Explain what the source helps readers understand. Check the law or policy section. Explain it for a general reader and connect it to the public issue. Improve the ending. Include implications or a recommendation that grows from the evidence. Proofread last. Check sentence clarity, punctuation, repetition, source attribution, and Sources Consulted. Do not spend the whole session only polishing the first paragraph. The final revision should improve the whole article. Materials to Open Before Starting Open the materials you need before starting Honorlock. You do not need to use everything, but these materials can help you revise efficiently: Your original Kane Confidential Investigative Feature draft Your instructor feedback and rubric comments The Kane Commission Prewriting Packet Assignment Kane Confidential Investigative Feature Outline Assignment Writing Consultation Assignment (Self) Sentence Sorting Revision Assignment Grammar and vocabulary materials Practice MLA Documentation Assignment Any source or citation information you need for Sources Consulted Allowed Websites These websites are allowed during this Honorlock session: Canvas: https://online.valenciacollege.edu/ Dictionary: dictionary.com Thesaurus: thesaurus.com Purdue OWL: https://owl.purdue.edu/index.html Valencia College Library: https://valenciacollege.edu/students/library/ Use the library website for database or citation work. Use Purdue OWL for citation and MLA formatting support. These sites should help with revision and citation support, not replace your own writing or analysis. Honorlock Conditions This final revision is completed in Honorlock. Honorlock records webcam video, audio, screen activity, and web activity. The exam is untimed. The exam must be completed once started. Open your materials before beginning. Use only approved course materials, your own previous work, notes, and allowed websites. You may use scratch paper and a writing utensil. You may take a short restroom break if needed. Check your camera, microphone, browser, and Honorlock access before beginning. Breaks: You may leave the recorded area for a short bathroom break. Multiple breaks may require closer review of the session and writing process. Accommodation condition: Students with approved or course-noted accommodation conditions may take brief necessary breaks to fulfill those conditions during the Honorlock session. Final Reminder Revision means making the investigation easier to follow. Use your previous work, feedback, and evidence to revise with purpose. The strongest final features will move clearly from evidence, to findings, to public meaning.
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