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Mаke аnd Explаin a Revisiоn Suggested time: 10 minutes Chооse a short section of your draft that could do a better job of engaging the reader, developing a character, or connecting the ending. Include all three parts in your answer: Before: Copy 2–5 sentences from your first draft. After: Rewrite that section. You may change its length. Explanation: In 2–3 sentences, explain what you changed and how it improves the story. Choose a revision such as: Replacing a general statement with a specific action or setting detail. Adding dialogue that reveals a character’s motivation. Making the opening problem or stakes clearer. Revising the ending so it connects to an earlier detail or choice. Correcting spelling or punctuation alone does NOT meet this revision task. Sentence explanation frame: I changed ___ to ___. This helps the reader understand or feel ___ because ___. Feedback for students: A meaningful revision changes what the reader understands or experiences. Explain the effect of your change rather than only saying, “It sounds better” or “I added details.”