Cоmpаre twо wаys оf revising the sаme original line, “He became, therefore, all of a sudden, a violent church-goer.” Revision 1 replaces “violent church-goer” with “devoted parishioner.” Revision 2 breaks the sentence into three short sentences: “He became a church-goer. It happened suddenly. He prayed loudly.” Which revision changes the syntax rather than the diction?